tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5583759.post5510280794454424743..comments2023-10-23T16:09:45.374-05:00Comments on Born To Write: SFFS Snippet - 7/28/12Alexa Gravehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/16250741051279927895noreply@blogger.comBlogger8125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5583759.post-53275916122408991742012-07-28T23:27:18.092-05:002012-07-28T23:27:18.092-05:00A really vivid scene. The description is surreal a...A really vivid scene. The description is surreal and definitely reminds me of having a nightmare.J.M. Blackmanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12452636020480500983noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5583759.post-92152701006265947572012-07-28T22:42:40.949-05:002012-07-28T22:42:40.949-05:00Creepy, made creepier with the baby. Intriguing, w...Creepy, made creepier with the baby. Intriguing, want to follow this character.Melisse Aireshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01478569639424075550noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5583759.post-456158983654851262012-07-28T21:14:17.441-05:002012-07-28T21:14:17.441-05:00Thanks for the comments, all! =)Thanks for the comments, all! =)Alexa Gravehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16250741051279927895noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5583759.post-47946316648669412482012-07-28T11:11:02.874-05:002012-07-28T11:11:02.874-05:00Excellent description. I love the use of scent and...Excellent description. I love the use of scent and the twist of reminding herself that it's only a dream. Lovely!JC Casselshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12359245589507445547noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5583759.post-37643577952273149532012-07-28T10:08:09.351-05:002012-07-28T10:08:09.351-05:00Very vivid, and with the underlying sense of doom,...Very vivid, and with the underlying sense of doom, despair, and a teeny bit of scary. I likey!!TK Toppinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00192845664117376346noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5583759.post-37082571773158182562012-07-28T09:38:08.702-05:002012-07-28T09:38:08.702-05:00Great details! I especially liked the description ...Great details! I especially liked the description of the scent in the air.Patrick Stutzmanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06701695102224164322noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5583759.post-62612279829882569602012-07-28T09:27:09.503-05:002012-07-28T09:27:09.503-05:00I agree with T.M. here - great sensory descriptors...I agree with T.M. here - great sensory descriptors used throughout, especially since it's a dream. Helps blur reality. Great snippet.S.A. Checkhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04682239850626207822noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5583759.post-16635075300309227382012-07-28T05:51:29.122-05:002012-07-28T05:51:29.122-05:00Lots of good description here...enjoyed it.Lots of good description here...enjoyed it.T. M. Hunterhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04315726033990784930noreply@blogger.com